Hmm dayum. I like the style you use here. The Imaginary was good. The best aspect from your verse was the emotion, i loved it. The vocab was weak here, but it didnt affect this piece. I loved The approach you took, and it's original which makes me more better. The concept is nice. I loved how you portrait like "Will she love me...will she love me not" Kinda thing..But this a nice poem here.

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