Voted For: K-Trini

Breakdown

Trini
Jackie Unceaselly attempt to dodge ,but this time the~loop-hole's-trapped~
Any applause for u comes from illusions,so you tell me~who's-soul-clapped~
Nice Wordplay and Nice Little personal on his crew
Pm'in me and callin me herb ? but your'e the faggot who's sedated
And Over 3000 posts in 3 months? , a nerd's is wat youv'e formated
Bad ryming Not all that Good of a bar or personal or punch sorry
Touchin on urself cause ya had last post in every thread in front page?
Jack the false ripper couldn't rip E-style if he payed under the blunt wage
......Nice :thmbup:..

Overall You Had a 75% Good verse your middle bar wasnt all dat good and it almost made your whole verse look played and wack So watch out fo wack bars man Theyll bring you down

Jack
Middleweight cuz you stay between guys, thats sick
K-Trini(dad)?.. ya, cuz "boxers" always stay on dicks
....Nice concept...
Your wack, ok-trini? And damn, your rhymes aint felt
N' I aint talkin boxin when trini swings bellow the belt
...Same concept as before man Be original ....
This guys bad, he's done, n' his rappin is fuckin sad
Fuck boxers, when I son this bitch call me trini-dad
Your using the same approach all throughout the whole verse man and thats bad you should keep using that same wordplay and same Approach in each bar mayne and thats what made your verse look that much unoriginal You was good with the first punch but then all the rest of your punchez was jus repeating the same concept as your first bar
so sorry i cant guve you my vote in this battle


my v/ Trini