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Better than you..
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IP:
this reminded me of some tupac style shit. you needa work on impact more tho. i wasn't really feelin this. if you wanna talk about death then you gotta get down real grimey but the way u tried it has been done before so i think you should try a different approach or sumthin to make it more interesting.
uppin.
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred…
Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug…
Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby…
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