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Old 06-30-05, 07:56 AM   #11
El Taco
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Voted For: M.C.

meh

mc got this one, he had witty punches, a nice personal and an okay personal....and his was creative/funny...quote was pretty aight, criminal, i dunno...you had okay concepts, but nothing really that great....you're wording and vocab was a little off, and your attempts at multi punches just made your punches sound whack....like the second bar came off really stupid....so you need to elevate wording of punches....you know how to form punches, you had decent punches, just nothing stood out cause your wordplay sucked.....word,

v/MC....RTF in the link in my sig
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