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Old 06-30-05, 08:24 AM   #49
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Voted For: Stanza

Poetic faggot, your bound to get merked in this meeting
N' fuck ya name yo this pussy can never stanza beating
aight start

Start fleeing yo, i've had it, the wack fuck can't hack it
You won't steal a win
...that means you'll never amount to 'jack-shit'
nice word-play

That's it, over, and you got owned because of the beef
I smack your mouth and feed ya your own fucking teath
aight ending...

2 bar was ya witty's hit/wordplay the other was aight decent flow and all not a bad drop 7/10



Yo

Only Way You Ever Get Wins Was when You Was Hangin Round Fans
Ill Leave You Hanging From The Web ....Like My name was Spider Man
decent start

Oh You Couldnt Connect With Dail-up.... So You Got D Super Lost
You Cant Hang With Me Man I Got A Rope..While You Got Dental Floss
could of been worded better but decent

Shabooyaka....You cant Handle The Heat So Get Off The Oven & Fry It
Bcuz Im Known To Knock Wieght of The Watchers Like The Atkins Diet

nice ending good punch...

u had a witty punch and a decent punch decent wordplay, flow was proper and all i felt u had a edge on punches and wordplay which edge u out on the win good close battle 8/10


can ya return the favor of a vote i have the links in my sig....

* or i will have my vote removed *