Pen and paper:
It’s the opener and this battle is already dominated
U can claim u are RAW but ull never get nominated
ehh... it's ok nigga.... 4/10
A fake gangsta tryin to think he knos bout narcotics and uzi’s
Stop telling lies cuz everyone knos u aint got it so don’t push me
nah........... 2/10
To the limit cuz it aint a gimmick I bring the WAR to RAW
Ur a blemish so u imperfect man so ur just a short flaw
meh............... 3/10
My rhymes will alter ur arrangement screwin ur scheme
Have u wonderin “OREO” while it blackens like cookies n crème
not bad....... 5/10
Have u wonderin in the “ocean” and when my punches hit u wont “sea”(see)
Cuz really u are “raw” ur rhymes stink like “raw fish” so think it narc-uzi
ok.... 6/10


overall, jus an ok verse. 20/50 (40%)

Narc dont get "cold-feet" cause hes a an "O-G" drinking a "40"
While this bitch only "holds-heat" when hes holding a "coffee"
meh... played.......... 3/10
Your rapping just "bores me" so im gonna rip this bastard faster than a "leopard"
The only disaster your causing is when u start showing the voters ur batteling "record"
ok................ 4/10
Keep relying on miracles cause in this battle "you wont last"
If i "chopped of both ya legs" u probably still think u could "kick my ass"
ok......... 5/10
I aint new to the rap game so when i win this battle it wont be "begginers luck"
To me its strange that you a living legend but when it comes to rapping dog u "really suck"
nah.......... 2/10
Are you outta your "mind' or are you just a fucking bitch ass "hood rat"
We might as well "combine" our verses together cuz they both makin you "look bad"
not bad........ 5/10


ehh.... bout the same as his verse. But jus a lil worse. lose the fuckin' quotes that shit annoys me like whoa!!! but ok verse. 19/50 (38%)

v/Pen and paper

RTF on this battle or I will delete this vote nah mean?

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