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Old 06-30-05, 01:07 PM   #25
criminal
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your soppused~to~be as Dope~as~me`bitch jut keep focused~G
This whole bar is a multie` bitch Go~die` since youre opposing~me
nice multis

arch~angel` I’ll leave your heart~strangled` so lets compare~levels
Your probably an alias` known as the gayest~kid call me a Dare~devel
ha funny good multis..

someone told~me` you aint fresh..just Moldy` like un-used~dairy
this newbs~scary reminds me of an overweight MM, like Drew~Cary
nice ending good punch good multis nice drop....

9/10 good multis nice punch creative and all with a personal nice....



this nigga says hes large.... allover tha street when he rolls,
yeah fat as hell..... got guys stickin 2 ur ass like cholesterol,
ha nice start...

im tha king of cheap shots leavin ya body full of holes,
fucka cheap shot son im sellin bullets from coles,
nah i aint feeling this....

ur lost in tha clouds but dawg ive come 2 kill a dream,
im freddy crueger bitch open up ur mind like a gillotine,
aight, freedy is a play concept...

lets say 4 evry bad line weve eva had they took a dollar and went to burn it,
then im livin it up son and ur a fuckin river hermit,
not feeling this bar weak...

u had a good bar but then it fell off badly... but good try fam keep elevating.... 5/10