Voted For: Stanza

yo, this is my honest opinion, stanza took this, i aint jus' sayin that cuz he voted my battle, thats my honest opinion.
JTR/darth to be honest i wasnt really feelin your verse that much at all, the rhymes were simple in my eyes and basic.

Poetic faggot, your bound to get merked in this meeting
N' fuck ya name yo this pussy can never stanza beating
Start fleeing yo, i've had it, the wack fuck can't hack it
You won't steal a win
...that means you'll never amount to 'jack-shit'
That's it, over, and you got owned because of the beef
I smack your mouth and feed ya your own fucking teath

it didnt seem like there was much thought gone into it, no metaphors or anythin. i've seen you do a lot better than this though. just put a lbit more depth into your punches and you'll be alright. it was alright verse though.your flow was alright though, didnt have too much of a problem witht that. 4/10. no hate btw, jus sayin it like i see it.

Stanza- your verse had sum nice punches in it man, especiall your closer,
Shabooyaka....You cant Handle The Heat So Get Off The Oven & Fry It
Bcuz Im Known To Knock Wieght of The Watchers Like The Atkins Diet
LOL, nice! 2nd line was a bit of self glorification, but it was still hot.
your flow and structure was on point for most of it, fell off in a couple of places but it wasn't bad.
yer it was just a nice verse overall, the onli thing i didnt like about it was the second line in the 1st bar,
Ill Leave You Hanging From The Web ....Like My name was Spider Man
that woz kinda played. overall it was a solid verse. 7/10

stanza gets my vote because he put a bit more depth and thought into his punches.
darth, you had a nice flow, but the punches were just a bit basic. no hate, but stanza got this

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