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Old 06-30-05, 02:00 PM   #52
J. Dubya
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Voted For: Stanza

Poetic faggot, your bound to get merked in this meeting
N' fuck ya name yo this pussy can never stanza beating
coo opener
Start fleeing yo, i've had it, the wack fuck can't hack it
You won't steal a win
...that means you'll never amount to 'jack-shit'
boo..
That's it, over, and you got owned because of the beef
I smack your mouth and feed ya your own fucking teath
weak closer


Only Way You Ever Get Wins Was when You Was Hangin Round Fans
Ill Leave You Hanging From The Web ....Like My name was Spider Man
weak opener
Oh You Couldnt Connect With Dail-up.... So You Got D Super Lost
You Cant Hang With Me Man I Got A Rope..While You Got Dental Floss
average
Shabooyaka....You cant Handle The Heat So Get Off The Oven & Fry It
Bcuz Im Known To Knock Wieght of The Watchers Like The Atkins Diet
coo closer

this battle was aight here, not really hard punches from
both opponents, both had decent structures, vocab needs
some help, and the flow were pretty decent.. but since
both of u had weak punches.. Stanza barely took this one
for comin less-weak here..

RTF Stanza on my battle against Criminal or this vote
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