Voted For: Astound

Flow-Astound,as jmsb had stretched lines and fuqed up structure.

Punches-Astound.although they were weak,were still punches nevertheless.The other guy had no punches.

Personals-None....both of you need to up your game up in this catergory.

Multis-Astound as the other guy had a basic rhmye shceme.

Voab..-Astound,jmsh.....go to school and pay attention in Lang Arts class.Ur vocab. suked.

Originality-Astound,they other guy was as basic as it can get.

Vote-Astound(vote in link below or vote will have to be removed)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196901