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Old 06-30-05, 03:19 PM   #7
J. Dubya
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Voted For: un-fuck-widable

verbal - ur punches were okay here.. the structure was wack
didn't like u set'd it up, but the flow was aight, & the vocab
needs help, but elevate more & work on ur punches though

wid - ur punches weren't all that great here, either.. ur flow
needs some help.. the structure was aight here, but overall
work on ur punches also