Banned: Cheating
From: N.Y./born in Trinidad |
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In my opinion.........the topic was bland.
Flow-Kein.....tweety ur lines were too long and I suggest adding some internals.Kein also structured his verse better.
Emotion-Tweety....tweety had better metas and that kinda shit.Only thing I didn't like was that gay porn simile/
Content-Kein...Kein;s story was far more compelling.Esspecially his 3rd verse where he spoke about a bitch who fucked strangers.Tweety.....my advice is to add more interesting shit.It was just,well,with lack of a better word,....boring.
Vocab.-Both of you had a nice vocab.
Originality-Tweety.....as much as I love the hoe shit..it's cliche and tweety was more original.
Close one here......but I gotta go with Kein.
Vote-Kein
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