Voted For: Astound

Astound... ya verse was pretty good, flow was good punches could of been better. vocab was alright... was kinda basic... ya 1st bar was your best... ya worst bar was the 2nd... puches were pretty good to... little bit more elivation and ya'll be real good

jms... ya verse was a little on the weak side... ya lines were a little to short like yur 5th line... short lines ruin the flow and dont have enough to them to make the punch work... ya got good ideas and concepts but just gotta work on the writin part of it

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