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Old 06-30-05, 09:03 PM   #9
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Aii

Blisss
not good enough for anything, and even stanza knows that its true
just look at his sig, he's even laughing at RAW for letting him in the crew
????? I See rock N roll Not Laughin ????
bit off more than you can chew, spits nothing more that splattered shit
but like running through windows, stanzas dreams of being big are shattered quick
The concept in that Line was Sort of played No Hate Though man
ripping this bitch, burning through ya head like im lighting a comb
crackin ya dome, cause im splittin stanza faster than writing a poem
....Again I Thiink the concept ..Not The punch...The concept of the bar is played and its still not hard hitting
still think ya deserve props....but anything to do with you, we dont care
only the dead know the end?....thats why your skill is going no where
.....That Was Aii Nuttin Specail...

Overall I Think That You Should try To Make direct punchez towards your oppenent instead of boostin yoself up even though you didnt boost yoself up a whole lot it was still noticable so i cant give you my vote in this battle so sorry No Hate Though Man

Stanza
Having A "Net In his Mouth" Was the Only time this dude ever "Catch a Beat"
This Guys Runnin from This Battle Cant you See The "Blisssters On His Feet"
Aii cooncept not hard hittng punch But Good Wordplay and nameplay
Im "Burning Down Trees" So You Know That Im Bout To "Smoke This Twig"
When Im finished People wont Know Who You Are Like The "Guy In Yo Sig"
Nice small Personal There man I Like that LOL
This Dude Games Rusty So Ima Smooth Him Out Like My Style Was "Lotion"
Cryin Cuz You lostThis Battle Was The only Time You had "Vivid Emotions"
Nice Diss towards his crew ......I had to defin vivid Though LOL
This Dude Has "No Game" Like "G-Unit" But Watch Me Give Him What Due
Bcuz Im Living Up To Your Aspectations When I Say That "This is for You
...Agaion Nice punch and personal all in one and good wordplay in the first line

Aii man Overall you have good wordplay and its funny if you had stronger punchez then you would be doper no lie man yo Verse wasnt all That In This battle But It was good enough to take the win and I also Think That You do good in focusing on your oppenents weak Points and that why i Think That You Take this battle

my v/ Stanza

Nice Battle Both of you


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