Voted For: artÃ-stica~Mente

this was a okay battle..
Trip: Your verse was good.. but not your best man.. i've read alot of your pieces and i think you know that.. but i personally think that you've done alot better before.. your vocab was good but not alot of good vocab.. your imagery I believe was okay.. its like there were words but no image.. its like a movie with no picture.. u could only hear em talking.. but yeah there were still some imagery.. but your emotion was there.. as i you sed in the begining you didnt have much time to write this so i understand..

7/10

Tweety:
Your verse in the begining was jst a lil confusing for me a lil.. but wen i got to the end i understood it... ur vocab was sorta there but trip had better vocab.. your story line was pretty good but the way you put it was the usuall.. like how u had different scenes like my prayer being answered and coming true n shizzle.. that was really good before but now that everyone does it its annoying to me... lol no offense but was still good.. but wut go to me was the ending.. ti was really good.. the last line Derik OMG your walking got to me.. im like oh shyt now it makes sence lol.. really good..

8/10

vote: tweety

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