Light Weight
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IP:
Voted For: blisss
not good enough for anything, and even stanza knows that its true
just look at his sig, he's even laughing at RAW for letting him in the crew
coo opener
bit off more than you can chew, spits nothing more that splattered shit
but like running through windows, stanzas dreams of being big are shattered quick
punch was decent
ripping this bitch, burning through ya head like im lighting a comb
crackin ya dome, cause im splittin stanza faster than writing a poem
good use of his name here
still think ya deserve props....but anything to do with you, we dont care
only the dead know the end?....thats why your skill is going no where
nice closer
Having A "Net In his Mouth" Was the Only time this dude ever "Catch a Beat"
This Guys Runnin from This Battle Cant you See The "Blisssters On His Feet"
weak opener
Im "Burning Down Trees" So You Know That Im Bout To "Smoke This Twig"
When Im finished People wont Know Who You Are Like The "Guy In Yo Sig"
meh, avg. punch
This Dude Games Rusty So Ima Smooth Him Out Like My Style Was "Lotion"
Cryin Cuz You lostThis Battle Was The only Time You had "Vivid Emotions"
nope
This Dude Has "No Game" Like "G-Unit" But Watch Me Give Him What Due
Bcuz Im Living Up To Your Aspectations When I Say That "This is for You"
1st line was aight, 2nd was wack
overall
stanza, weak punches u had there.. the font was str8-gay.. the structure
was okay here, vocab needs help, and the flow lack’d.. overall those
punches could’ve been harder than that though
blisss, you had a decent structure, the flow kinda lack’d a little here,
vocab was aight.. and the punches, well, you came on top here with
the punches..
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