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Old 07-01-05, 11:58 AM   #9
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ill smash your herb crew, even you can get hit
kid, im hitting R.A.W so much
..........................ur mom will get pregnant
7...wording cud be better, but this was still a fire line, comedy in there to which is good, disses should make people laugh.
dickriding my ass. i dont need it so fuck that suck-up shit
i got a bullet proof cock the way Tephlons all over my dick
4...i know ya been gone a while L.I. but you should know that any dickriding lines are played out.
get out of my way. you bout to get passed
and thats a wrap....cuz saran all over ya ass*
6...short and simple, decent wordplay in there, not too complex but still nice.
this kids connected to herb lines, aim for dope, wont hit one
you cant plug into tight bars thats wire gonna lose this one**
6...again a nice bar. the wordplay wasn't the best i've seen from you at all but still a nice finish to ya verse.

OVERALL: 23/40



I'm all up IN-Destructable emcees causin erosion an fixin you're Name
'Cause ya 'Limited Edition' flows .......are just livin a 'Dream' Like GAME
5...i wasn't feelin this opener, the set-up was aight, but the punch itself wasn't all that hard-hittin.
You pre-approved Lame... with 'mic checks' but wheres the Cash?????
I aint even gotta throw a punch, cuz when you swing..
........................................Ya get knocked out from the Backlash.
7...LMAO!!! personal on his user title was nice, and the 2nd line to the bar was funny as fuck.
rhymes like whiplash, get ya spine broke an you'll wanna Sue-me
but on the court, you dropped the ball....
.................................................. ..quicker than hittin puberty!
7...again!! dope bar with a nice bit of humour in it.
ya played style aint nothin new-to-me, you just catchin a whoopin
your like an obese street fighter..always bitin...never pun or Hookin
5...this was kinda gay!! a little too basic and the concept was a flip on a played concept.

OVERALL: 24/40



close battle here.....
i've seen better from both, especially L.I. i seriously expected you to walk this battle....no hate to you teph, but then L.I. came half-assed like he aint even tried....first line was dope, then came with a played concept....nice wordplay in the closing two bars but nuthin overly creative like he ya usually do.
teph, the opener and closer were pretty gay, nuthin hard hittin just mediocre shit, luckily you had the two fire lines which made me laugh hard in the middle, that is what won this battle..........the fact that you made me laugh more with ya verse....

V/ - Tephlon.
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