Voted For: .Kan.i.Bul.

wow, this was a nyce battle....good lines coming from both sides....


Kid Imma Verbally Slay U....Everyone "Cuts Dis Nut Off" Like Circumcized Cable
Rip U? I Cain Cuz Im Abel, Signed 2 Feces...No One Gives A Shit Bout His Label!
^^nyce word play mayne....kew lil punch to back it up
Honestly Beatin Doza Is Simple..Since He Cant 'Stand Beef' Like Disabled Hindu's
Dis Disciple Been Thru...Cuz His Bars So "Sea-Nile" Dey Resemble "Moses-Facial
^^lol....ya wordplay is nyce...kew lil punch with it
Like 'Lost Dogs' Ya Lyrics I'll 'Pound'...True Talent??? NOPE U Still Havent Found
Whos Doza Today?...Like "Memorable Nymphos" U KNOWN 4 Switchin Ya Style! *
^lol....good personal....
Nigga Da Truth Hurts....So Admit It, Ur Da Reason "Usher" Made "Confessions"
Pretend Theres 2 Of Me...Cuz Winnin...U Gon "Let-Us" Without Salad Dressing! **
^...wordplay was kew....nyce lil diss

overall:...you had a pretty strong verse cuz you kept it consistent...you got skill with the wordplay

To Be Truthful You Mom Said Lose You So This Guys Adopted....
I'll Blaze Ya Transport You To Asia And Leave You In A China Closet...
^clean opener...punch was kew
Fix Your Verse Come Harder On The Bridge Your Lines The Worste...
Son Chill, Don't Come Hea To Battle Take Notes Similar To A Typing Clerk....
^nope....wasnt feelin it
Quoting Bars In His Sig,Not His Like The Grill Of A Car He's Just A Bumper...
Your Girl Was Easy To Pull, She Seen Me And H2 All I Had To Do Is Humm-Er...
^...i saw the relation in both lines...it was a good concept..and hard ending, but 1st line shoulda been wordin better
Let Me Give You A Break,But On The Real Ya Verse What The Worste They Are..
Have You Floating On A Boat And You'll Die With The Expressions On A Birthday Card..
^wasnt feeling this

overall:...ya verse had some good point...but you didnt stay consistent....work on that

v/.Kan.i.Bul.
on the basis of punches...consistency...personals...and overall effect...

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