i say if drugs and guns is what yu know....go for it....yu cant write about what ya dont know....this was kew....i liked that 12 guage line.....and the one about the meat cleaver....seemed cocky.....hmm...work on ya stucture...some lines were stretched and others werent...if ya gonna go long....GO LONG....dont hesitate....thats how yu miss the ball and everyone gets mad....lol.....str8 drop

keep writing!!!

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