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Old 07-01-05, 02:36 PM   #48
J. Luth
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aiight lets see this shit:

DC:
This kid needs help, i told him his vocab need "raisin"
so he got fruity, wrote a verse, and then threw grapes in
um, opener was nice, punch was ok... 5/10
yo ass get layed out, wit gats you sprayed out
like every house party punch, ya shit's kid n' played out
umm.... not really feelin' it 3/10
golden shellz's a punk coward, know that he aint beatin me
he like the simpsons, yellow bellied and erased easily...
ok................ 4/10
ya style's as dusted as the front lines in IRAQ
like warren sapp, you'll be retired wit two nines to ya back
haha....... nice. feelin' this one. got my attention 7/10
besides the fact that you 'dumb', you cant speak clearly
battles in text but got tha nerve to holla "nobody's hearin me"
lmao..... wow, liked this..... 8/10
but feel renewal, you could shine wit a pound of a jewel....
but rappin wit LIL JOHN wouldn't issue you the sound of approval
(YEAAAAAH!)
oh, shit, pickin' it up towards the end. nice 7/10
im livin tha truth, hittin you goofs, my sound heavy like thunder
assemble ya troops? but like you suspended from math class.... you already "out-numbered"
hmm.. not bad............. 4/10

overall, real nice verse man. You started weak, had me fallin' asleep on the keyboard. But then that sap line made me go, oh damn!!... and then kept it goin' wit next two punches. nice man... good shit....... 35/70

Ok, GS:
I thought about battlin a herb but who better to choose
no sense in wastin 5 credits if u know that you'll lose
ok, too basic........ 3/10
Ya rhymes is preschool all patty-cakes and rattles
thimk u gangsta? just coz KIN-Ethic declined ur battle
ok............... 3/10
losing to this nigga is like losing to a "SUBTLE" fag
i'll treat like gym clothes carried in a duffle bag
nah, not really hard......... 3/10
u supposed to be a flyweight? ha ur just new to da game
why view poll results there aint gonna be 100% by ya name
tooo basic.......... 4/10
my personals are like "dunks" ill posterize this guy
call me "IMAGETITAN" coz u beneath me like a posted reply
nice, not bad....... 5/10
Ludacris? nah but my lyrics make u say "oh" like a Ciara music video
after the poll is closed ill still be here "continuing" on this "hoe"
nah............ 3/10

Nah, not really that great of a verse, man. You didn't really have that much good shit in this. Flow was cool, but work on wordplay and wit in your verses. Decent drop, I guess tho. 21/70

Overall, IMO this battle was one-sided. Docontiune took this easy. Those 3 punches in a row were only lines worth mentionin' to me in this batle. v/DC


also RTF on this battle or vote WILL be removed. Trust me:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=197037
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