Voted For: criminal

v/criminal

I peep'd ur past, and son....your ass
Your lines are longer than paragraphs
...weak....
Wit the dash'-An'SlaSH! shit, save the space
Your just an example that Trojans break...
...lmao...played, but still funni
A straight mistake a mis hap a broken criminal,
The only conviction u hold is bein invisible
..weak...
I break your spine an coccix, switch cords an spit,
Just to give a legitamite reason for u to spit shit
..decent..kew multi.
This Convict's Cut, Shower time...Your Fucked
This Boy's got less delivery than a Pizza Hut
..weak hitting..
..eh, ya verse was mediocre...nothing really grasped me...

The Best Regarded, Aggressive, Times up!, so Set ya Guard Up
Ya ‘words above mine’?, NEVER, unless I Replied to a Thread YOU STARTED!
..played concept..
When I spit and say “there ain’t a whole lot to it”, It’s cuz it was an EASE-to-Bust…
But when YOU spit and I say “see there ain’t a whole lot to it” it’s cuz it was WEAK-as-FUCK!!!
..i had to read it twice...i get it...that was a kew concept..
In stead of “markin his set backs” he carves “Progress-in-his-Memory”
So I “Squash the beef” and “heat it when it’s In my grill” like Hamburger’s “Process-and-Delivery”
..lol...im feeling this..
Yall “cop out” like “police shift endings” when they Leavin-for-their-Own-Homes
Claimin ya ain’t “seen nuthin worth replyin to”…that’s cuz you still Readin-all-ya-Own-Flows
..lmfao...that was hot..
hmm...you got good concepts...but you take the long road to get to the point....i felt this verse, though..that ender was tight

...yeah, criminal took this with an all out better verse...punches and everything
Doesn’t matter HOW NICE you are cuz I CRUSH-Vet’s-Perfect-Spits…
Because it’s “easy to clown you” like “One-Step-Circus-Kits”!!

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