Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy


E.C?????? Only tyme u involved in ''EXplicit'' iz typin da : hump :
Intrested in ''basketball''?...Dumass, we all kno ''white men cant jump''*
^^nah...this a lil uncreative and weak,4/10
ur skillz in a slump, an wen it comes 2 da court..U n da ball got a Divorce
put u on ''skates'' & u fell off, so yuh get ''shot down'' lyke a HORSE**
^^nice flow....Ok punch....7/10
we on a collison corse, u can feel da force BITCH..llyke ur ''skywalker''
juz a shit talker, u stay on tephlonz dick & in our forum lyke ur a RAW Stalker
^^2nd a bit too long...but ight...6/10
i''ll juz ''pork-ya'' wita smoked ham, cuz i know how much u lyke beef
u & da ''establishment'' dont mix, lyke 2 dicks without a trick...im styll in disbelief
^^1st line played..2nd ight....5/10
if u culd, u'd b a rap thief, teeth markz on each on ov mah verses
last tyme sumbody said ''Yo ur SICK!''...
..................Diz dumb dick went & got a flu shot frum da Nurses
^^not a good closer....4/10

This was an OK verse.No fillers.Some lines could use some compression as it fuqed up flow.A lil uncreative.Closer was dissapointing.Some played lines like Star Wars and beef ones.

learn english, when u type you make peoples eyes go dreary,
hense your name, coz your text will always be khaoz in theory,
^^Ok rip on name...7/10
your the illest? funny coz khaoz's wordplay is always fake,
punches are weak and being fat is the only time ur a heavyweight,
^^^nah...1st line filler...weak...3/10
ill cut up your torso and serve in restaurents for sushi dishes,
throw u in the tank so you can say you sleep wit the fishes,
^^^Basic and played..2/10
as i go on to murk this whore.....and you've herd this before,
i asked do u want beef? and he replied "no imma herbivore",
^^^Beef lines are played.....3/10
you got shit on lock ye only when your whacking... cause,
coz giving brain is the only time you'll be cracking jaws
^^nope.....4/10

U were just weak.U started off OK with a decent rip onhis name.But the rest was whack.Sleep with fishes?...that's a played out metaphor.It's been used endlessly in mafia movies.Stop with beef lines too.It's just gotten redundant.

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