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Old 07-01-05, 11:09 PM   #8
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Voted For: Marshall Mathers

Marshall Mathers

When I say you're wack, it's tru, it's no curse
And jus like your name you DO, flow worse
4/10

lacked creativity so u that got a 4

Man, you're so wack, I'ma make you feel defeat
Puttin' your dick on a stove, only way you "cum" wit heat
5/10

nothin new everyone uses that line

You're not dope like Rakim, man, it's all inside your head
I'll put a dick in your mouth.... and fuck what you said
6/10

better creativity but GAY line 4real man



- i liked your verse, shit started off simple but ended much better....u had a punch, no flow, some wordplay, a meta....overall (15%)


Flow Verse

you must rape ur mother . . . maybe u have no father
maybe ur girl’s a slut . . . . maybe pissed cause Christina Agullia won’t give u a fuck u must have his problems cause I see no other way . . . that you would go and bite somebody’s name
Must have thought someone called you eminem. . . must be confuse they said M&M’s
Cause you yellow on the outside . . . but since you got ur jeans sagging they think ur black on the inside
cat don’t even have to responde cuz ur lines are all wack . . and like cheap booze all flat
and I feel sorry for you u must hate urself . . or u must spit like eminem just don’t go and “lose urself”

what the fuck do u really want me 2 say about that verse? stretched like fuck...no punches, wordplay (do u know what that means?) nothin

OVERALL VOTE= Marshall Mathers

hit that battle in my sig with a vote
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