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Old 07-02-05, 07:56 AM   #25
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Voted For: Mad Dog

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=194833
return da vote in diz link plz


mad dog has no flow...we pay no attention when dis homo kid text.
i neva saw 'money grow' skill wise so in his raps i show 'no interest'.
^^^ not feeling dat, personal wuz weak

he's obsessed with me quotin...its gon be easy y didn't dis hore 4fit.
i dont mean 'somthin ppl say when they mad' but my dick 'DOG-ON-iT'.
^^^ dozent make sense, ''my dick dog on it'' it wuz worded horribly

so he a 'SaC'rafice his life......just da dick ride and be on some1's 'ballz'.
from u i wont run at all..& why should i be MaD when ur da underDOG.
^^didnt rhyme & again da lines wuz horribly worded

ima put underdog...heard ya audio u lie'd & said ya flow was type lethal.
mc's hide ya bars..whut does a 'mad dog' usually do? they know 2 'bite ppl'.
^^dope, definately ur best bar

how u vet fam...when in ya audio's & text fam ya flow off.
why go da 'pet land' with money when i can cum on rv & 'own-dog'.
^^^it wuz str8, nuthin 2 hard hittin though

Not da best verse, personalz wua lackin & da wordplay wuz kinda basic in ur verse, propps 4 da ''bute ppl'' line, dat wuz nyce, good personal & dope punch, but da rest ov da verse wuz kinda off..

Can't stand this text head he's got RV in the middle of his name,
Coz he knows his net reps his only chance of fame,
^^^ not feelin it, nice personal, but da wordplay culd of been better

Ya still type like a newb ya not so "harmful but",
Even if you were Stan Lee you still won't "Marvel us",
^^^ nyce

Ya overobssesed wit text i can tell by the way you write,
You prolly think you actually spittin somethin on a mic,
^^^dope, nyce flow, & good concept

All this time you been on RV and still you've learned shit,
Coz honestly what supposed vet still "typz lik dis"?,
^^ ha ha ok i type lyke dat but still, it wuz a real hot punch

So run along get a new style coz the garbage you spew,
Would look better if a German wrote ya verse for you,
^^ ha ha i hate germans! & da closer made me lausgh, good stuff

easily da better verse, personal were droppin in every bar & u matched da personalz up with some witty punches

Personalz=Mad dog
wordplay=marv [even though both were kinda basic]
punches=mad dog
flow=mad dog
structure=mad dog

mad got diz EZ..........Plz return da favor in da link at da top of da page mad dog
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