i thought this was a decent battle track.. some parts i didnt like your flow.. others the flow worked.. so decent flow.. lyrics were good in part and in others you got really simple like you needed filler.. you need to make ya filler better flow wise and delivery.. the filler thats in this is like wtf happened ? lol.. not a diss.. its just when u go from punches to a really really really simple line, you throw off ya audience a bit.. "best send em out a SOS ill letcha rest/
whats next, got n e questions? yes/".. thats one of the parts where u get real simple.. id say jazz up ya filler and youd be a solid battler.. decent track tho.. i liked alot of the punches..


ps: im being hard on ya track because i see you at a different level than you are.. yah'mean ? i see you elevatin real fast.. so im tryna give u different feedback than just the normal "i love your shit" feedback.. aight keep droppin hot.. -1

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