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Voted For: Darth Vader
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stanza, only good punch you had, was the closer, and it was still pretty weak...first two punches, nothing man....too basic, and not effective....calling yourself spider man? stupid....and the 'hanging' concept was pretty dumd...whats a rope going to do anyways? meta was really weak, and you had poor wordplay....elevate dude, no hate, but jack takes this one easily
jack, nice shit man, i like the opener....creative, witty shit, and easily took this one....wasn't really fond of the closer though, didn't really go well with your two other punches, cause they were great, then you just had a okay punch, nah saying.....but overall, you took this with harder, more creative, effective punches....good opening personal off his name with wordplay....good, short verse man, keep up
v/darth vader....RTF
Possible crew vote removed. Blisss = Drakel, who is in The Establishment
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