Voted For: Dopium

your battle record is fucked 1&2 soon to be 1&3
cus when this turns to k.onfliktz my verse burns ya like its 9th degree
^^umm.....lame....2/10
havin you call M.C firetruck in here to hoes u off
cus my verse leave u whipped from cough (1)
^^didn't flow nice....4/10
look at his name this kid cant even flow his own verse
he can reimberse his way in a black hearse
^^^too basic.......3/10
Son you better bow down and say your prayers
cus my lines leave ya handicapped more then old fucks in wheelchairs
^^^OK...lil unoriginal.....4/10

A buch a below average punchlines here.First bar....ya seemed to be kissin Konflictz and 9th. degree's ass.2nd bar was ight....but didn't flow well enough.3rd bar was too basic.4 th bar was uncreative.YA need to step up.

Dopium creative . . . is that your pseudonym for opium
Well that is what you gonna need
^^^where the punch.....0/10
To handle the pain I’m gonna leave
You might be on drugs but I aint no allusion
^^didn't rhyme....0/10
I’m like a concussion leave with straight confusion
and only when I take dope will I think ur lines are dope
^^^rhyming dope with dope?.....0/10
Cuz cat the only time u be above me is if we act out a scene from a civil right movie . . . and go hang on a rope
^^nope....0/10

U structure suked.90% of ur bars didn't rhyme.No punches except for the last line which suked.Flow suked.Vocab suked.No creativity.Read the tutorials and figure out wat a punchline is.

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