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A Letter 2 Heaven
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07-02-05, 05:25 PM
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Black Queen
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decent read short and you were lackin emotion but overall it was decent you had a nice strucuture cud up yo vocab ive seen betta from you so i kno you can do betta den this keep droppin 5/10
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