Voted For: MiSk
If ya want yur first win, u chose the wrong person to battle
'ridin' so many dicks.. u should change yur name to Blazin Saddles*1
^^ight.......6/10
Kids ashamed of his talent so he kicked his own ass to the curb
i saw a picture of you once in the dictionary... next to the word 'herb'
^^too simple.....3/10
Droppin' shit thinkin' its hot... check the does on yur meds
them pills got ya all confused, yur punches go over ya own head*2
^^too simple,ya got a lin to him sayin it?....4/10
After this battle I'll leave ya frozen in time... outlined in chalk
give ya so many holes in yur body ya'll be whistlin' while u walk*3
^^^OK...5/10
Ight verse.Structured good.1st bar was ur best one.That herb one is far too basic.If ya had a link to him sayin that he doesn't understand his punches ....then tat one would have been dope.But he neva said it....so it suked.
yo im full of suspense .. MISK??.. u like a broken cash register u dont make sense ( cents ) // ur whole style is trash.. ur rhymes and toilet paper have one thing in common.. i use them ta wipe ma ass//1 wrong punch line and ill put the tecks ( text) to ya face// denslowly watch the smile erase//im runnin out of time ----- bitch ---- so i suggest u read between the lines// if life was a dice game ive been shootin head cracks since age nine// by the end of this i kno u prolly had - it - with - me// ma rhymes - so - sweet - they - give - u - a -cavity// half the shit i got...ull never be able to afford em // cause im always on the track like jeff gordon
Played as fuq.I'm unable to breakya verse down line by line because of ur structure.Get rid of that noob structure.That wipping my ass line is in the fuckin tutorials.
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