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Old 07-02-05, 07:51 PM   #15
K-Trini
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Voted For: Verbal Shoota

Flow-Barz....structured better and placed rhyming words better

Punches-Verbal,Barz had far to many played concepts.Like semen=cumming sweet,bad cell phone connections,and beef=vegetarians.Those things have been done a million times.Those are just some...there are more played lines in ur verse.

Personals-Barz.....Ripped on the dudes old name buck shot.

Multis-probably verbal although both of you need to improve here.

Originality-Verbal...like I said before...Barz whole verse was full of nothing but played shit.

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