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Old 07-02-05, 09:23 PM   #14
K-Trini
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From: N.Y./born in Trinidad
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Voted For: Wicked One


Fuck ya gimic cus line ya stomach wiv faeces ya cudnt spit sick shit
Combining boxing n cricket u know my punches strike out wicket
^^Decent I guess....4/10
Thick bitch couldnt campaign for a win yet brings re-petition/repetition
So ur verses lack back bone nowonder you flop for the competition (verses-VS)
^^^OK......4/10
Just listen in amazement ill line ya cheek bone have ur jaw adjacent
Complacent? Its a statement ill 'end one' like finishing conversation
^^nah......3/10
No debation ill hit stealth curious that ill stampede on ur health
Making an alias to hide only time ull make a name for yourself
^^Nice.......7/10
Im striking violence listen split this organism like internal fission
Consider 'mating silence' the way i under-mime ur position *
^^Creative........6/10
A magician make u dissapear cus we all know you try chokes
Optimistic that ur genders hazy like pregnants with high hopes
^^^OK.....5/10

A lot a mediocre punches here.The one with makin a name for yourself with alias is ur best one.U had some creative lines in there.Flow was igth.But need some more heat in ur punches.

Hey Ho it's the same ol' same ol' great flows make ya brain explode...
Talk yo shit and cross that bridge so the carnage can take it's toll...
^^^1st line suked....3/10
This is a recipe for distaster, realize your battling the master..
With razor blades, I'll leave you with more cuts than terrible actors...
^^SG.........3/10
This dude is on crack, thinkin I wont be able to strike back ..
Thats laugthter, I'm on the war path holding more arms than heart attack havers...
^^^SG.......2/10
Come see this lame, look at the ego, thinking he left me rattled...
Please, he's now in the fight for his life like a custody battle...
^^OK.....a lil simplisitic...4/10
Forfit this battle, and retire, you'll never take my title...
This dudes trying to measure up to Dizzee Rascal from
the bottom of a downward sprial...
^^ight......5/10
Man fuck you and your frozen ice solid stare I'm making it melt...
Please, testin me is a game of solitaire you're playing yourself
^^SG a bit.....3/10

Too much self glorifing.Chill out with that bullshit.Focus on dissing.Talk about urself in Open Mic only.Flow was Ok but went off near the end.Structure was ight.But ur punches and SG caused you to lose.

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