Firstly man who say's you gotta have big vocab to blow this shit? Slim Shady rips harder then any other mainstream rapper and he doesnt have as big of a vocab as lot's of other 'dope' rappers. Yeh man so who cares as long as it's good it doesn't have to have crazy language to be good.

Alright man you started off in your first verse slow but the second was dope and then the third was just as dope or better.
There were a few lines that stood out, you were pretty consistant, I don't want to leave toy feed dude like most of these cat's bullshit a lot in feed.
I liked these lines....

all these battle MC's stop bragging you hot shit.
my mouth droppin,I'm baffled you actually got hits.
I'm growin suspicious,that you know I'm the best.
but you can't say it,cause then I'd grow in success.

the white flag wrapped around, just to show that I'm nuetral.
but don't front,you never know a lone soldier can bruise you.
no blades no guns so no I won't shoot you.,
but don't wait,don't come closer,so I can nuke you......shit

Nice shit man...I'm out, Peace.

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