E.C: ain't feeling approach you used but you managed to drop a solid topical piece. Not so much of an imagery piece though, more an emotional one. I like how ya portrayed the ideas and feelings within the person's mind, questioning whether or not it was a dream. Vocab could be improved though and another remark is that you use a very direct approach, no real poetic wordings. You're straight forward with it, try to insert some more mysterious, metaphorical expression or shit ya kno, flow was coo though...

Compose: maybe not the most original concept but you worked it out nicely for real. Vocab was excellent, you had a good amount of complexity yet kept it understandable which is a nice add-on to the piece. Emotion was strong, went into detail how the person viewed all the things happening and current situation. Imagery was there but not that much though, flow was aight, had some nice poetic wordings in there which gave the whole piece an interesting vibe.

In the end, my vote goes to Compose because I felt his concept and piece more...no hate to E.C, you still my fam man...

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