Voted For: Tekneek

slik flo - ur shit was WAAAAY to basic........ur punches weren't hard hitting everything was really simple rhyme scheme....you need to add wordplay too.....get some personals goin.....but u can improve....jus helpin ya out

Tekneek - usually i dont like structures like that but i did like this one....you had good punches and a couple personals....multies were there and your vocab was pretty nice...keep spittin.....

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