Voted For: NaRc-UzI


Pen n Paper

It’s the opener and this battle is already dominated
U can claim u are RAW but ull never get nominated
5/10..decent punch
A fake gangsta tryin to think he knos bout narcotics and uzi’s
Stop telling lies cuz everyone knos u aint got it so don’t push me
4/10...not that good...basic
To the limit cuz it aint a gimmick I bring the WAR to RAW
Ur a blemish so u imperfect man so ur just a short flaw
7/10...nice
My rhymes will alter ur arrangement screwin ur scheme
Have u wonderin “OREO” while it blackens like cookies n crème
4/10...not real good
Have u wonderin in the “ocean” and when my punches hit u wont “sea”(see)
Cuz really u are “raw” ur rhymes stink like “raw fish” so think it "narc-sushi"
6/10...decent wordplay

26/50

narc-uzi

Narc dont get "cold-feet" cause hes a an "O-G" drinking a "40"
While this bitch only "holds-heat" when hes holding a "coffee"
7/10...pretty good
Your rapping just "bores me" so im gonna rip this bastard faster than a "leopard"
The only disaster your causing is when u start showing the voters ur batteling "record"
6/10...decent
Keep relying on miracles cause in this battle "you wont last"
If i "chopped of both ya legs" u probably still think u could "kick my ass"
4/10...not real good
i aint new to the rap game so when i win this battle it wont be "begginers luck"
To me its strange that you a living legend but when it comes to rapping dog u "really suck"
3/10........weak
Are you outta your "mind' or are you just a fucking bitch ass "hood rat"
We might as well "combine" our verses together cuz they both makin you "look bad"
8/10...ur best

28/50

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