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Old 07-03-05, 02:18 PM   #22
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Voted For: Verbal Shoota

.Barz Of Steel.

This faggot penis rubs... ya body'll end up scattered with debri in tubs
After I "fear-factor" this queer bastard..........Make him "Eat the slugs" *
^uhm only first part of first line is a punch actually, rest is nice wordplay

This poser ain't never dump heat, he's a "Vegetarian" he "don't want beef"
Shit, he could "mix his semen with sugar" dude still won't ever "cum sweet"
^lmao at second line, nice one, good wordplay

Dawg you always come the weakest, I got shit that'll cut ya breathin'
Shit, "Buck" will "Get Shot"............................Like it was "Hunting Season" **
^first line's bleh, second is a nice personal punch

I'm a hooligan man, but how is this kid fooling with grams?
When the only "coke" he's seen........................came in an "aluminum can"!! ***
^coo punch

This dude flows with legends?? How? When is flow is always thrown, rejected
For "Always Having Weak Bars"...............Like "Bad Cell Phone Connections!!"
^good wordplay again, first line is an aight punch

I son emcees, Teph, don't fuck with me, I run this beef.............................
I'm like "Stricnine to your insides" It's no wonder "You Can't Stomach Me"
^wordplay's aight in last line, first one is ugh

Tephlon, you have no skill whatsoever, and you spittin flames is nonsense
Because the last sweet bar you had.........................Was made of chocolate
^uhm not feeling ya closer really...


Verbal Shoota

Barz of steel? shit..i got a blow torch that'll melt 'em like Plastic
Only time you gettin applauds on the mic....is when you pass-it
^haha lmao at the last line, niiiiiiice

UNdestructable emcee?...I dont remember you sayin your Dyslexic?
then again, read ya verse an it Shows!..like the ribbs on an anorexic
^good wordplay in last line, coo first one

I got this bitch pm'n me daily ''yo teph, what about that battle?!''
What about it?...Kid, I GOT YOU SHOOK!...like i'm playin witta Rattle
^no real punch but aight bar

See, FAG...I peice my words like Lego Blocks, the wins come in Flocks
Last time dude met-a-phor.............He tapped out from a ''Leg-Lock''
^tight wordplay formed into hardhitting punch

killin this beef like livestock....have him in witness protection on a farm
Low-life virgin...He aint never ''cuttin''...Unless you can count self-harm
^haha lmao at the last line, hotness right here!

DOG!...Be cool, calm, collective...... whatever, just leave the salad un-tossed
I never met any emcee before...who was eager as this whore...for a loss
^coo bar, feels like a filler though...

Fuckin herb, claimin your new? yet you know everythin bout RV...
Joined may 05...low-life, you got more posts than MC's who signed in 03!
^haha nice nice...hitting hard

You wannabe me........... or maybe ...do you just wanna join RAW...???
Wont talk so tough..
........when i ram these Keys down ya throat an give you LockJaw....
^coo closer

In the end my vote goes to Verbal Shoota cause he came with more personal and creative punches but BOS, you dropped very good as well! Nice battle here!
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