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Old 07-03-05, 02:37 PM   #10
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Nice battle indeed...

Propain-Real good verse from you. Imagery was fantastic, vocab was unbelievable, and emotion just added to perfection. This was great man, real talk. I was feeling your verse, and how it portrayed the story and stayed on the topic. Truly good work here my friend.

Immense-Decent drop, but you lacked emotion. I wasnt feeling it. I dont know, it just wasnt reaching out to me man, it was boring. Vocab was good, imagery was decent, but emotion lacked. You didnt do as well of a job on this topic as Propain did, so that is why he gets my vote.

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