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RTF Cali....or vote will be removed.

Black:
Nice topic, concept was strong....Could of used a little more emotion an vocab....i was feelin ya Imagery throughout.

Vocab could use a little brushin up, overall it was a good topic tho'''easy too read, structure was good.....nice writing, just need too elevate in emotion an vocab, an you'll be one of the better topical writers around here.

Cali-

Real nice, all ya poetry writing is paying off....good use of vocab, creative lines an really nice imagery.....emotion wasnt as strong as it could of been, but it was deeper an seemed too be more intouch with the emotions than black was.

really nice drop Cal, good read....the scheme you chose when i first started reading it i didnt think was as strong as blacks, but you got better as the peice went on, good drop both of y'all.....good enjoyable read.

RTF Cali or vote will be removed homeboy

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