ight...well im going out like in 3 minutes, so ima vote, and if you need me to expand more later, feel free to pm me.....but i felt compose took this one, felt he came more creative, and really made his story work, with the selective vocab, which really brought out imagery, and the wording....which elevated emotion....EC, just thought your's was too basic, didn't really go too indepht with it, and you weren't really creative....vocab was dry, which really made it less interesting....i enjoyed compose's more.....well done to both, compose takes it though

v/compose

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