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Old 07-03-05, 06:40 PM   #12
K-Trini
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Voted For: .Kan.i.Bul.


Laughter is the best medicine so ur rhymes are a cure
Bitch keeps posting bull shit like we asking for more
^^u said his rhymes got wit,complement...0/10
This is like a game of hungry hungry hippos
The winner is the one with the most “marbles”
^^no....0/10
So dumbass go away . . . you passé
Couldn't pour piss out of a boot if the instructions were on the heel . . . And now u’ve lost so just deal
^^C'mon..at least one punchline.. 0/10
And remember I’m the hero bitch . . .and if you lucky I’ll flip u and put u to the left of me like my side kick (get it)
^^NO......0/10

What the hell.There was not one punchline in this shit.Ur flow was horrible due to stretched lines and worst structure.But the punches was the worst part.It like you didn't even try.

Act Stupid I'll Deal Wit You....Ya Friends Dont Even Want A Deal Wit You
Mills? U Deal Nickels....Dis "Dicks Green"....Finish Jerkin Ya "Dil Pickle"!!
^^^didn't rhymes.....suks...3/10
You Still Livin A Cunts Life...."Bone" Husbands Den Literally "Dog" Wives
This Dogs Trife....He Paid His Cock 2 Quit Drugs....Cuz It Foamed White!! (get it?)
^^^OK...not all that though...4/10
Everyone Knows U Sideways....But "Rainbow Brain".....I Dont Mind Gays
So Continue WACKIN YASELF EVERY WEEK...Like Abusive Bod-Days!!
^^OK....4/10
U Dont Deserve A Verse, Must Be 50 Cent...Cuz All Ya Flows Get Worse
Last Time U Cursed...Ya Mom Beat Ya Pants So Hard It Became A Skirt!!
^^^No.....2/10

ur verse flowed and was structured far better than the other guyU had some weak punches in there.U also need to work on punches.But the differnece between you and the other guy was that you actually had punches while the other guy had none.

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