Voted For: Streetz


Wes admit im dope, even ur friends'll-wanna-vote-Matt/
only time u "DRAW LEAD" is when u SKETCHIN a "PENCIL" on a "NOTEPAD"/
^^whack....doesn't rhyme
i smoke-lads, while u tha kind ta hail-Cops, u get hit wit "SHELLS" but not tha kind a SNAILS-got/
Wes be like a "POSTMAN", tha way he delivers ojbects in "MALE'S-BOX/(mailbox, Queer)
^^forced multis in 1st line....but nice wordplay
Streetz'll Fail-not, this kids tha kind ta run his mouth where tha D's-work/(snitch ta detective's)
so ima have ta pull tha blade out, and put "3 STRIKES" down his chest, like an "Adidas" T-shirt/
^^ight.....
ayo deze-hurt, my bullets im referin to, im leak this Punks-Hardened-Head/
tha only "SLUGS" Wes fuck wit, were in his Front-Garden-bed/(slugs=insects)
^^^played.......
Wes could have "VIAGRA" stuck in his throat, and still not VOCAL-HARD/
someone warn Wes, when i say ima "LAY ROUNDS ON THA HOUSE" i aint talkin bout shoutin alcholic drinks at tha LOCAL-BAR
^^^Nah...........this one whack

Structure your verse better.It was ugly and tough to read.Sometimes....people might not even look at your verse if it's structure bad.But you got potenial.U had some nice wordplay and shit in there.But you also had lines that didn't rhyme,forced multis,and some played concepts.

Like opposites of front flips ya gonna flop out
streetz got no class… like highschool dropouts
^^OK...
And fuck this kid……………… I got him beat
Everyone walks over him no wonder he’s street
^^Nice......
this aint a battle of skill, man you have no talent
gotta be afraid of heights you aint up for the challenge
^^Nah.......weak
cant top me we all know streetz is just a rookie
and im excited….my post has never been this close pussy
^^A lil clique and weak
this kid is really hard and got me bored like wood
and he is from the streets….of a suburban neighborhood
^^Too simplisitic
ill run you over and drive over your heat
im wes CITY….shit I OWN the STREET
^^Self glorifyed

U startd off nice with 2 nice punchlines.But then after that you fell off.U self glorified and was just to basic.U had nice structure and flow.Better than the other guy.But the reason you lost is because of punches.

Vote-Streetz
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