Voted For: Stanza

overall these were good, i felt that chronic, you were basically telling news, not as much of a story, whereas stanza's verses were felt more as a story......the last verse after *tape stops*...was deep as hell, and thats why i had to go with stanza

the structure was good with both
and they both flowed well
i just had to go with stanza becuz i felt his deeper

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