Voted For: Ambid

Ill give a sweet tooth with this punch and ill take the cake and make you RE-treat
Your second rate and ur losses are like mike jones rhymes they just seem to repeat
^^1st line too long....and punch is played
Please tell me that your not trying to get a deal cause your chances are no good
Cause admib got a lesser chance of getting signed than a retards yearbook
^^OK..........
Im suplying the crack while reminding the whole Rv that admin is tryin to put on an act
Its a matter of fact that the only time i failed at something was when i tried to be wack
^^Self glorifing......
Your gonna idol the man cause im a life taker and murdering to me is a bad habbit
Cuz Im gonna need three rolls of toilet paper after im done shitting on this faggot
^^^Played.........

This verse dissapointed Narc.try to shorten your lines a bit.Ur punches were played and uncreative and you had a whole bar of self-glorifing.There was only one bar that was good.and that was all it was....good.Nutin spectacular.

you cant play me chump, you just shaking hands w/ doom.
i mean you thought homo, when i said i was gonna beat-on-you!
^^^Nah.....uncreative and weak....
you aint raw, when my flow connects you'll dissolve to shit.
an' my punches will have ya seeing stars so i guess you could say i put your asterisk!*
^^^Creative yes.....but weak
dont be optimistic b, your a waist so i'ma just strangle you witha belt.
you nothing man, coz like an' inside joke yo, you just kidding yourself.
^^^1st line was nice but 2nd wasn't.
so make do like a spanish foster, and simply adopt the "el".
an' just swallow this slug hoe, fore you get pumelled by shells.
^^horrible closer

U had nice structure but you had some lines that were long.Ur punches were pretty weak.but you had some nice wordplay.the star line was creative but weak.U didn't self glorify or use played punches like Narc.

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