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Old 07-04-05, 04:02 PM   #58
Verse190
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Voted For: Darth Vader

this was an ok battle
Poetic faggot, your bound to get merked in this meeting
N' fuck ya name yo this pussy can never stanza beating
nice word play ok opener 7/10
Start fleeing yo, i've had it, the wack fuck can't hack it
You won't steal a win
...that means you'll never amount to 'jack-shit'
another good wordplay, but no real punchline
That's it, over, and you got owned because of the beef
I smack your mouth and feed ya your own fucking teath
weak closing, i wasnt really feeling that, really a played out line
basically an a ok verrse. no punchlines here. the wordplay was better than stanza's though. had a personal or two in there but nothin impressive
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Only Way You Ever Get Wins Was when You Was Hangin Round Fans
Ill Leave You Hanging From The Web ....Like My name was Spider Man
i like that first line, but the second one was played out
Oh You Couldnt Connect With Dail-up.... So You Got D Super Lost
You Cant Hang With Me Man I Got A Rope..While You Got Dental Floss
that aint a diss....
Shabooyaka....You cant Handle The Heat So Get Off The Oven & Fry It
Bcuz Im Known To Knock Wieght of The Watchers Like The Atkins Diet
weak wordplay, and that self hype shit dont make for good battling
no punchlines, weaker personals and you really wasted yuor closing on a self hype line.
much respect, keep elevating
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