Nice piece, feeling the concept you worked with here, good how you used quotes of Ezekiel in between parts. Flow was hot like whoa, multis, nice rhyming words, internal rhyming...very good. Vocab was definitely on point, good amount of complexity in your words. Imagery was there, could picture what you were saying. Emotion was strong, had some deep insightful lines in there that kept readers focussed.

Solid piece!

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