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Old 07-05-05, 08:20 AM   #30
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WOW, this was a close battle, after i read topicals i thought he def gonna take the win, then i read LE's.

Topical, yours was nice, had a good structure decent enough flow and i was feelin the story behid, nice imagery too.

The reason LE takes this is for using better vocab and his was a lot more emotional and deeper, both had good flows and shit but LE just came hard here and i was feelin the categorys you used.

RTF Vs Verbal S man.
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