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you a misled fake with a headache need to be admitted to the doctor because you don't spit it proper// even if you adopt a name you still couldn't drop the flames your slop lame like porn flicks get the popcorn quick you was born sick so you a scorn dick// even with an adult education your stupidity will result in devastation when i operate on your brain and populate your veins with maggots you faggot//
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Maddrapper, stop trying to do fucking multis and use punchlines and stuff for once, for god's sake. You're not getting recognition for shit like rhyming 'get the popcorn quick you scorn dick'. You're just going to get attacked by people who are tired of you. You looked like you were trying to do bars with the // thing...but it really looked like you were just fucking throwing anything that rhymed with the next word in it.
Use wordplay, a good structure and shit. Check the tutorial's forum...seriously, Madd, you know you aren't the best. Perhaps you don't deserve to be dissed by everyone, but you fucking probably deserve to be banned for posting your verses in people's threads and never dropping any links whatsoever.
5/10...because a lot of it was just there to rhyme.