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Voted For: MC:Philosopher
yo, MC philosopher- you actually had a pretty tite verse u know, i was really feelin your verse. it flowed well, the structure was good, wasn't too basic with the vocab, im impressed.
best bars:
to take out lames like u so now im a kidnapper
but u wouldnt be worth "50 cent" if u was a "penny raper"//
that was nice.
and if u want "computer" love then u came to the wrong "gate-way"
cause "stevie wonder" say u ugly thats bad when a "blind date" say//
LOL, that was pretty dope!
the opener looks like it could've been hot, but some of the spelling was wrong, so i had to go back and check my flow on that. overall though, a pretty good verse. 7/10
Slik flo-you came pretty weak with this battle. the punches were kind of basic and simplistic throughout your verse. there wasn't any metaphors or anything, no real depth in your punchlines, elevate on that aspect of it. your flow was aight though,still went off it in a few places, but it wasn't bad, and it was structured pretty well.
best bars:
maybe he shud change his name to MC:Explainer
coz in about 5weeks he'll be known as MC:Complainer
if u win this(which you aint)battle..u will be crowned kool
at least if i win this...i dont act a foo'
^^^ i'd probably say they were your best in that verse, but they weren't that good at all really! no hate, just sayin it like i see it, and you did say it was a quick verse, so it was aight if you did it quickly. but i wasn't feelin your verse too much at all really. 4/10
no hate.
RTF on one of the battles in my sig.
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