Voted For: Predator

this was a pretty good battle ya know....kind of one sided but it had me entertained


Black-dis wack nigga want to battle, i guess my only question is why
cuz his flow is worst than a 'sung verse' from a nigga like 'T.I.'
this was ok...opener could have been better
i hate to spit like dis, rippin pred up and ruinin his whole career
but greatness in ya future is like ya bitch hair, homie it aint there
haha...LMAO
my shit is crushin you, so take whateva you wrote down to say and trash it
cuz dis one is 'one-sided' like tha 'cassidy and freeway battle classic'
this was ok...didn't really hit though
its a wrap bitch, in eight lines four bars i ate yo cookie ass up
and please stop rappin cuz we lil 'eminems', we 'dont give a fuck'
this is a no no
dun...jus sum quick shit...votes please...and if it seem to "basic" for yall, it only mean dat i dont take time to prewrite every fuckin battle like most of yall...so if you dont get it, dont fuckin vote at all, dig?...'its Black bitch!'
seem like you a lil angry...for a song this would be ok...but for a battle this wasn't good.

Breakdown-this verse was mediocre...could have been better wit the vocab and punches...a lil more personal would have been nice too Verse- 4.5/10




Predator-Where I'm from we beat niggas freestylin or written/B.City a lame, how he spittin',where the fuck is "Tha Mitten"?/--this was ok...could have been worded betta to make it sound clean

I've read this niggas battles, and I say he lost in some/
cause Black City's flow is shaky like he got Parkison's'/
nice...heard it befo
Black City actin like he won't get hit by tha Uzi or tha Tech/
B.C. guns don't bust, like they haven't hit puberty yet/
this was really nice punch
Black City represent the GB Boiz/
I wiped my ass wit em', now we should call'em the TP boiz
haha...nice closer


Breakdown-this was was above par...nice battle verse...if you add a lil more complexity it would be real nice..Verse 7/10



VOTE-Predator

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