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Old 07-05-05, 08:01 PM   #11
Confucius
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Voted For: Jameson

my vote goes to jameson.
i can tell both of u all are nebies like me

Jamesom:
Should I bother tryna own you or weaken your health,
Bitch, You're wack and your entire verse speaks for itself,
wanted to get high in your minds and picked up a pot habit,
Ask this cat to rock the mic he'll start throwin rocks at it,
This cat iokay flow s too egotistical for me to even bother with is,
I ain't wack so let this 'bitch do the work' like 'fathering kids'...*

pretty solid flow u had better punches than your opponent u could work on some multies, vocab , and maybe wordplay. structure is okay and personals were to.

microcker
look jameson you don spit flames son
ill shove u thru the hole u came from
yeah its mic rocker i be rockin mics
but this dude is gay he flyin kites
you couldnt be hot if u had a fever
ill cut thru u like a fukkin meat cleaver

okay flow needs work u could better your punches. work on multies, vocab, and wordplay. your structure was okay to . u had personals but they could be better.

can yall repay the favor by droping an honest vote in my battle against slik flo
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